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6
NUMBER SIX
collars two prisoners on
the prairie and identifies them as Melville’s, with the help of the
eighteen-point profile by Harrison Hayford in his brilliant essay on
“Melville’s Prisoners,” first chapter in the book of the same title
(published by Northwestern University Press in 2003 with a foreword by
Hershel Parker). The plight of a “literal or virtual” prisoner, as Hayford
demonstrates, surfaces repeatedly throughout Melville’s writings. This
recurring prisoner motif appears most vividly in works published between
1851 and 1853, the time frame also of “Scenes Beyond the Western Border.”
Quintessential expressions of the prisoner motif (or “cluster situation”
involving, as Hayford shows, numerous related motifs) take the form of
tableaux in Moby-Dick (1851), Pierre (1852), and
“Bartleby” (1853).
As
Hayford reads it, the Hotel de Cluny tableau in chapter 41 of Moby-Dick
presents “buried imprisonment” in the image of a “captive king” suffering
under the weight of centuries, like “Enceladus the Titan with mountains
piled on him” (5). Pierre ends with a tragical tableau of the hero
as condemned prisoner, whose only escape is by assisted suicide. Bartleby
ends up in the same New York prison (known as “The Tombs”) and dies
“huddled up at the base of the wall.” In his final tableau, Bartleby
confronts prison walls, as he formerly confronted interior and exterior
walls of buildings on Wall Street.

Harrison Hayford on “Melville’s
Prisoners”
The central figure is Prisoner; the typical scene,
Prison. The typical tableau is Confrontation: the Prisoner
confronts the Superior, or a massive object embodying his power, mystery,
injustice—any of these, or two, or all three. He is facing,
looking at (eyeing) it. . . . A third figure frequently
involved is the Observer, somebody who “looks at” the Prisoner. He
registers the Prisoner’s situation. Sometimes this Observer is callous,
indifferent to the Prisoner’s plight; sometimes the Observer is
sympathetic . . . (Hayford, Melville’s Prisoners, 7-8)

Two
discrete interludes in “Scenes Beyond the Western Border,” both from the
March 1853 installment in the Southern Literary Messenger, showcase
the typical cluster situation discovered by Hayford. Each scene exhibits
at least thirteen of Hayford’s eighteen associated motifs. Moreover, in a
synoptic chapter heading, unique to this installment, the author gives
each episode a title, printed in italics. The assigned titles convey the
artificial, staged quality of these episodes, encouraging readers to view
them, like the passages Hayford analyzes, as tableaux: A night-watch
in the mountains, and a dialogue thereon (157-158); and Cub, a
tragedy in three acts (159).
Each scene features the essential elements of Prisoner, Prison, Superior,
Confrontation, and Observer. Night-watch presents the Captain as a
virtual prisoner of “mountains like prison-walls.” The Superior here is
impersonal, blank space, the “profound silence” of a desert wasteland,
which the Captain confronts all night long during his existentially lonely
watch. In the revised book version, the Superior is personified as
“dull tyrant space” that freezes the heart with “its stoniest frown”
(386-7). The Observer is the narrator’s less than sympathetic friend,
Frank.
Hayford identifies two
kinds of authentic “noble-souled” Prisoners in Melville, “the kind who
stays facing up to the Superior and the kind who attacks it” (10). In the
night-watch episode, the Captain represents the first kind; in
Cub, the imprisoned bear cub represents the second kind.
A night-watch in the mountains, and a dialogue thereon opens the
March 1853 installment of “Scenes Beyond the Western Border” in the
Southern Literary Messenger. This night-watch is a meditative
and masterfully written set-piece in which the essential predicament of
the brooding Captain of U. S. Dragoons is that of “Melville’s Prisoners”
as outlined by Hayford.

The central figure is the Captain, depicted as a virtual prisoner on a
prairie “Desert,” surrounded by massive mountains. The prison motif
becomes explicit in the Captain’s observation of “mountains like
prison-walls.” The Superior is impersonal,
blank space, the “profound silence” of a desert wasteland—what Hayford
calls “unpersonified heartless immensities.” Revisions of the 1853 text
powerfully intensify the motif of confrontation with the mysterious,
invisible, and silent higher power: in 1857 the Captain apostrophizes the
stars and seraphim, and personifies the Superior figure as “dull tyrant
space wear[ing] its stoniest frown.”
Alone throughout his
long night-watch, the Captain determines to face the void, though
it break his mind. His lone confrontation with the awful silence,
intensified by the imperturbability of Frank, his slumbering friend,
yields this fine line, maybe the most haunting in the whole series:
In darkness, with long unrest, it verges
madness. (157)
The Observer is Frank, the Captain’s imaginary friend. Initially it is
the Captain who watches Frank, who sleeps the night away. However, in the
morning-after dialogue, Frank turns observer and commentator, representing
the “callous” rather than “sympathetic” variety of Observer. Frank
criticizes the depressing mood of the narrative so far and cryptically
addresses the Captain as an “unintelligible lover of antithesis (not to
say plagiarism).”

The Night-Watch and
Dialogue (March 1853)
(adapting the outline of Harrison Hayford in
Melville’s Prisoners, 9; The night-watch episode is
reprinted in Scenes and Adventures in the Army at pp. 385-387.)
Motifs Associated with Prisoner...
According to Hayford
Present in night watch?
| 1.
Human dignity:
manliness. |
R
central
figure a Captain of US Dragoons |
| 2. Injustice:
grievance, exile. |
R
"far―lone―forgot" |
| 3.
Injury to body |
R
“nervous fit” (1853); joints penetrated
by dew or frost
(1857) |
| 4.
Immobility: sleep |
R
"the nightmare of a sleeper, who should have watched" |
| 5.
Confrontation |
R
desert, mountain; “a power
over me”; stars and "dull, tyrant space" (1857) |
| 6.
Mystery |
R
"mysterious boundary of dream-land" |
| 7. Compression or
contraction |
£
Not present. |
| 8. Family:
estrangement, deprivation, ancestry |
R
"reunion" with
loved ones |
| 9. Food:
eating, drinking |
R
"strong coffee" (deleted 1857); fasting |
| 10. Clothing |
R
metaphorically, trees dressed "in wintry mourning, draped with moss" |
| 11. Solitude:
separation from society and normal life |
R
"My watch is lonely and fearfully silent." |
Motifs Associated with Scene...
| 12.
Enclosure: prison |
R
"mountains
like prison walls" (1853 only) |
| 13. Spatial
contrast or penetration; higher/lower,
inner/outer |
R
"wondrous
contrasts" of internal psyche to actual surroundings; ocean storm
(outer world) vs. summer dreams (inner) |
| 14.
Light from outside or above:
a shaft of light
|
R
“a gleam of heavenly light”; also “ray of
heavenly light” with other 1857 revisions including “dazzling beam.” |
|
15.
A light or similar object hanging or held overhead |
£
Not present as such. |
| 16.
extended time:
ages, eternity, etc. |
R
“gloom of all years” |
| 17.
Antiquity
|
£
Not
present. |
| 18.
The supernatural or cosmic |
R
“air-spirits
supernaturally whisper” |
 |
Three of Hayford’s four prime examples
(from Moby-Dick, Pierre, and “Bartleby”) were published in
1851-1853, the same years in which “Scenes Beyond the Western
Border” appeared in the Southern Literary Messenger.
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The night watch
episode has fourteen of Hayford’s eighteen “Motifs”; 15/18 in the
revised book version, as published in Scenes and Adventures in the
Army (pp. 385-387). The exemplary Hotel de Cluny passage in
Moby-Dick also contains fourteen of the motifs. |

Cub, also from the March 1853 installment,
presents a captured grizzly bear cub as “the imprisoned hero” of a mock
tragedy.

The Cub’s prison is a wagon, conceived as a theatrical stage.
The Superior again is a force, embodied perhaps in the soldiers who
actually captured the bear cub, or the actual prison wagon, but in a
larger sense symbolizing vaster powers of oppression and enslavement. As
recounted by the Captain, the history of the bear marks it as a stand-in
for Melville’s Pierre, the book Pierre as well as its hero.
References to brother and sister, an enraged “lady-mother,” imprisonment,
hanging, “the author,” and critical reception by “the commentators”
and “the future reader” are practically unintelligible without reference
to Melville’s Pierre.
The Cub represents the attacking variety of true Prisoner, the kind who
chooses to “move forward against the Superior, aggressively.” In
Melville, as Hayford observes, “[a]gression is imaged as a movement, often
sudden and violent, against the Superior.” True to form, the chained Cub
threateningly howls at his jailers, represented as “much moved,” that is,
alarmed or frightened, “spectators.” In the third act the
Cub suddenly rebels, reducing the wooden stage “to splinters” in
the violence of his attempted escape. Hayford finds that “thematically,
aggression always fails; the blow rebounds—its result is
self-destructive.” Thus did Pierre’s aggression fail, and thus do the
impassioned outbursts of his allegorical equivalent, the bear cub, also
fail. Cub finally leaps to his death, leaving only one ambiguity for
“commentators” to wrestle with: did the victim drown or hang?
Numerous “Observer” types in the guise
of spectators and commentators surround the imprisoned bear-cub. Behind
them stands another Observer—the narrating Captain, here the
self-described author who would “immortalize” the Cub as a hero of
resistance against the confining expectations of unappreciative
contemporary audiences.

Cub, a tragedy in
three acts (March 1853)
(adapting the outline of Harrison Hayford in
Melville’s Prisoners, 9; Cub is reprinted in Scenes and
Adventures in the Army at pp. 390-391.)
Motifs Associated with Prisoner...
According to Hayford
Present in Cub?
| 1.
Human dignity:
manliness. |
R
"imprisoned hero"; "high tragedy" |
| 2. Injustice:
indignity, insult |
R
"innocent
brother"; "wrongs"; "losses" |
| 3.
Injury to body |
R
"unusual amount of
sanguinary incident" |
| 4.
Immobility: quiescence,
paralysis, trance, sleep |
R
"sank overwhelmed"; "counterfeit of death" |
| 5.
Confrontation |
R
"dangerous passion of his
howl" |
| 6. Mystery |
£
Not present, except for the unresolved mystery of how the hero died
(drowned or hung?) |
| 7. Compression or
contraction |
£
Not present. |
| 8. Family:
estrangement, deprivation, ancestry |
R
brother, sister, "baffled lady-mother" |
| 9. Food:
eating, drinking |
£
Not present. |
| 10. Clothing |
R
"tatters" and "rags" |
| 11. Solitude:
separation from society and normal life |
R
ignominious death (without "world's applause, or hopes of a grateful
posterity") |
Motifs Associated with Scene...
| 12. Enclosure: prison |
R
bear cub
as "the imprisoned hero" |
| 13. Spatial
contrast or penetration;
descent, dive |
R
cub "sank
overwhelmed"; fell "headlong" to
death by drowning or
hanging |
| 14.
Light from outside or above:
a shaft of light
|
£
Not present as such. |
|
15.
A light or similar object hanging or held overhead |
£
Not present as such. |
| 16.
extended time:
ages, eternity, etc. |
R
"future reader"; "posterity";
"immortalize" |
| 17.
Antiquity
|
R
"primitive
tragedy"; Greek Chorus |
| 18.
The supernatural or cosmic: gods,
heaven, fates/fate, the universal |
R
Chorus
delivers universal truth in form of the moral: "dumb beasts
prefer death to slavery!" |

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