18 September 1852: The New
York Herald reviews Pierre
A harmless madman in the first chapter, he
[Pierre] is a dangerous poet in the last. Let him
hang!
...Mere analytical description of sentiment,
mere wordy anatomy of the heart is not enough for a novel today.
Modern readers wish to exercise
some little judgment of their own; deeds they will have, not characters
painted in cold colors, to a hairbreadth or a shade. We are past the age
when an artist superscribed his chef d’oeuvre with the judicious
explanation, “this is a horse.”
Mr. Melville longs for the good old times when
the chorus filled the gaps
between the acts with a well-timed commentary on the past, and a shrewd
guess at the future.*
*Quoted from Herman
Melville: The Contemporary Reviews, ed. Brian Higgins and Hershel
Parker (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1995), p. 438.

March 1853: Cub, a tragedy in
three acts
In crossing the Platte this morning, the
grizzly bear cub came on the scene in his final act.
It will be remembered by the patient and
attentive future reader of this
dry and methodical narrative, that its first appearance on any stage, was
in “high” tragedy—that the first act embraced an unusual amount of
sanguinary incident—that an innocent brother (or sister,) being ruthlessly
slain, and the baffled lady-mother left (unceremoniously) full of towering
and demonstrative rage,—the imprisoned hero himself sank overwhelmed—or in
a well-acted counterfeit of death, (and was born off, remember,
on a “real” horse.)
That in the next act, (and three acts shall do for the tragedy of my
bear,—originally they had but one,—but that was at the
sacrifice of a goat,) he came to life in a manner that might very
well have been criticised as an overdone piece of stage-effect—but that in
fact, the spectators were much moved, and gave full credit to the
dangerous passion of his howl.
To-day, then,—for I scorn anachronism—was
performed the final act. The stage
(wagon) was on “real water.”
Enraged at his wrongs, his losses, and his galling chain, the “robustious
beast” acted in a ridiculous and unbearable manner; aye, “tore his
passion to tatters, to very rags,”—splinters; the
stage (wagon) could not hold
him: and finally in despair, he “imitated humanity so abominably,” as to
throw himself headlong, and so drown—or
hang himself: (the author
cannot decide which—even after a post mortem examination;—and so
leaves the decision of this important point to
the commentators.
My tragedy is all true,—and if not quite
serious, has, as is proper, its moral;—but rather, as I have alluded to
the primitive tragedy, let that “future
reader” here imagine the entry of the
Chorus, and their song to
Freedom! That dumb beasts prefer death to slavery! Liberty lost, they
can die without the excitement of the world’s applause, or hopes of a
grateful posterity! (It is not possible, I think, that the cub could have
known that I would immortalize him.)**
**From "Scenes Beyond the
Western Border" in the
Southern Literary
Messenger 19 (March 1853): 159. Heading for this
installment alludes to a lapse in the series, only now "Continued from
Sept. No., 1852.” Reprinted in chapter 17 of Philip St. George Cooke,
Scenes and
Adventures in the Army at pp. 390-391.

Apart from the context of Herman Melville's
Pierre and its
critical reception, the Captain's narrative is barely intelligible.
Formally, Cub dramatizes a relatively minor event of the 1845 Rocky
Mountain expedition by U. S. Dragoons. On June 25th, as topographical
engineer William B. Franklin recorded in his journal, "two of the men
brought in a pair of grizzly bear cubs, one was live, but they had been
obliged to kill the other" (March to South Pass, ed. Frank N.
Schubert, p. 20). Of the same event, J. Henry Carleton wrote to much
the same effect, that buffalo hunters "accidentally came across two fine
grizzly bear cubs, one of which they were obliged to kill―but
the other they succeeded in bringing into camp alive." Carleton adds
only a brief sequel: "It was the commanding officer's intention to
have had him taken to the States; but a few days afterwards,
unfortunately, he died" (Prairie Logbooks, ed. Louis Pelzer, pp.
258-9).
In "Scenes Beyond the
Western Border," the narrating "Captain
of
U. S. Dragoons" presents this unfortunate bear cub as “the imprisoned
hero” of a mock tragedy. The Cub’s prison is a wagon, transformed into a
theatrical "stage." As recounted by the Captain, the history of this
bear marks it as a stand-in for Melville’s
Pierre―the
youthful hero Pierre
and
also Pierre, the book. References to brother and sister, an
enraged “lady-mother,” imprisonment, hanging, “the author,” and
critical reception by “the commentators” and “the future reader” all have
identifiable counterparts in the text and contemporary criticism of
Melville’s Pierre.
Below the surface of the "play,"
Cub plays
wittily on key words and phrases in the New York Herald review of
Melville's Pierre. The Herald reviewer taunted Melville
with the aesthetic preferences of “modern readers.” Modern readers
want action, not overextended "analysis," Melville was told. In reply,
the Captain goes out of his way to address a more sympathetic “future
reader,” someone who is more “patient and attentive” than the moderns
exalted in the Herald.
The reviewer faulted
Melville for expository overkill and compared him to a primitive artist
who has to affix warning labels like
“this is a horse”
to wretchedly executed drawings. Defying the Herald reviewer on
this point with great gusto, the author of Cub takes pains to label
horses and wagons everywhere he can. The hero was hauled off by “a ‘real’
horse.” The stage on which Cub plays out is really a
wagon. When the “stage (wagon)” fords a river, the author dutifully
reminds his audience that the wagon is now “on ‘real’ water.”
Quotations from the
third act of Hamlet associate the “robustious” bear cub with the
bad actor who struts and roars for the entertainment of the groundlings.
Perversely, the caged grizzly bear cub violates Hamlet’s stated rules for
good acting, just as the author of Cub violates the New York
Herald’s rules for good writing by giving his depictions such obvious
labels as "horse," "wagon," and "water."
The only way the hero
of Cub can “move” the “spectators” (soldiers, also his jailers) is
by howling. Finally, the caged cub self-destructively rebels. It is
left for unnamed “commentators” to fix the true cause of death as drowning
or hanging. The otherwise outlandish notion of a bear committing suicide
by hanging is perfectly consistent with the reading of Cub as a
satire on the Herald review of Pierre. Melville’s fictional
hero, Pierre, was condemned to hang but instead committed suicide. The
suicide outraged the Herald reviewer, who twice advised
Melville, “Let him hang.” As if to conciliate the judicious critic of the
Herald, the author of Cub leaves the “important point” of
how the hero died for the critics to puzzle over. The Captain's way
of leaving the resolution to future "commentators" closely parallels the
way Melville left a crux in the Vivenza chapters of his third book (the
problem of identifying the anonymous author of a fiery social critique)
for his future critics: "the commentators on Mardi, some four or
five hundred centuries hence."
The Herald
reviewer accused the author of Pierre of having mistaken his novel
for Greek tragedy. Melville was so hopelessly windy and old-fashioned, he
needed a Greek Chorus to expound and comment on the action. Here again,
Cub sides with Melville against the Herald reviewer. In
another "in your face" move, the author casts his mockudrama as “high
tragedy.” After the play is done "the Chorus" (explicitly described as
such!) enters and comments on the action. According to the Herald
Melville wanted a Chorus; the Captain gives us a Chorus. In their
“song to Freedom,” the Chorus delivers the unambiguous “moral” of the
Captain's play: “That dumb beasts prefer death to slavery!”

...
dumb beasts prefer death
to slavery!
What a moral! What a
writer, to draw it—to admire and in some measure identify with the poor
brute that perishes “without the excitement of the world’s applause, or
hopes of a grateful posterity.” In connection with captured animals, the
real Philip St. George Cooke never talks of slavery, or nobility, or
humble dignity. No, your authentic Captain of U. S. Dragoons speaks
in more practical terms of stuffing and mounting, or eating.
The Herald
reviewer intuited Melville’s desire for a Greek Chorus and commentary, but
did not look for any “moral” in Pierre. Melville’s fastidious
friend Evert Duyckinck, however, complained emphatically in the
Literary World of the book’s “most immoral moral” (Contemporary
Reviews, ed. Brian Higgins and Hershel Parker, p. 430). The “song to
Freedom” in Cub thus answers at least two influentially negative
reviews of Pierre.
The theatrical
staging and other contrived elements beg the question, why bother?
Why does the author bother to elaborate and embellish and over-dramatize a
plain tale that takes up one or two sentences in reports of the same thing
by others? All these contrivances―staged
imprisonment, ambiguous suicide, dissection by “the commentators,” protest
of slavery by “the Chorus,” and transcription for the benefit of some
ideally sympathetic “future reader”―seem
nonsensical except in some relation to an allegory of artistic integrity.
The author, Philip St. George Cooke's gifted ghostwriter, insists on
treating the captured bear cub as a symbol of the oppressed artist who
defies confinement by popular expectations (so helpfully articulated in
the Herald review of Pierre) and suffers accordingly.
The Cub episode appeared in the March 1853 issue of the Southern
Literary Messenger. Near the end of the same year, in November
and December
1853, Putnam's magazine featured the story of another of Melville's
prisoners, "Bartleby, the Scrivener."
Bartleby's soulmates
(if only he knew it!) are the Captain's nameless bear cub and all
dumb creatures who
prefer
death to slavery.

